Well, since you asked,,,,,,,,,,,,, your choice of text placement is really not pleasing to my eye. However you place it, "All gave some" needs to all be on one line, and "Some gave all" needs to all be on one line. If you rotated the boarder slightly, the top and bottom edges would be horizontal, and then each line of text would fit on a single line........... However, having the points at 12 and 6 o'clock positions probably looks better.......... if the boarder were to be circular instead, then each line of text would fit nicely on a single arc.....
Chuck Keysor (circa 1956)
PRT Alpha 60" x 144" (circa 2004)
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